User talk:Elyriz/sandbox

Hell Elyriz,

Good start.

Here are a few suggestions I have:
 * revise sub-headings, for instance I think "taxonomy" would be more appropriate rather than "History and Naming", also I would change "microscopy" to "Morphology", as well as make a separate section for "primary metabolism" seem like you have a lot of information about it. I would also add a sub-heading for "Identification"
 * add more wikilinks for words such as conidiogenesis
 * you've mentioned that its not pathogenic, but has been associated with a few medical conditions. In those instances, is there any special treatment required? or the conventional treatment would be able to cure the manifestations of this fungus?
 * references should be cited prior to punctuation marks

Overall, great job and so much information!

Zhmurcha (talk) 19:29, 29 October 2014 (UTC)

Assignment Feedback
Fantastic work on your article so far! You have a lot of good information on Sporobolomyces salmonicolor, I suggest including some points on whether it affects organisms other than humans, if possible. Other than that, I suggest proofreading for spelling and grammar, as well as sentence structure. I look forward to reading the final version of your article! YaeRamKim (talk) 15:42, 30 October 2014 (UTC)