User talk:Elysegross

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Annie's Peer Review
This is such an interesting topic and you did a great job researching! I just have a few suggestions: -I think the section on "Successes" seems unnecessary since it's only a couple sentences. Would it make sense to incorporate it into the Demonstrations section at the end? Same issue with "African E-Schools Programs Today" since it seems repetitive of the previous section. -It would be great if you could use a couple more case study examples to demonstrate broader outcomes, or ones that weren't necessarily successful. -There are various incomplete sentences and some grammar/spelling errors that you could catch by proofreading. -In general you could use some more detail, especially with more statistics/hard evidence. Your sources look great and this looks like it will be a very informative and interesting article!

Annie

Anniecprice (talk) 23:21, 3 April 2020 (UTC)