User talk:Emadelfar/sandbox/Wiki Page Draft

Hey Emad, other than the font being a little fuzzy, your figures look great.

1. Second sentence - The "s" on extend(s) should be removed.

2. Where you write "This figure shows...", instead you should have "Figure 1 shows..."

3. Very last sentence, "gain" should be "grain."

4. In the Accompanied Structures section, "deferential" should be "differential."

5. "In one hand" -> "On one hand" (Growth fault dynamics section)

6. While your overall page is nice, would it be possible to throw in an example of an area with growth faults?

7. As Brian stated, moving the "Importance" section to the top of the page would benefit the page.

8. Since you are focused on oil and gas, would it be possible to insert a seismic line showing growth faults off of wiki commons into your page?

Chasebill (talk) 20:25, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

Hi there, the sketches are well done! I have 3 suggestions:

1) Since "depocenter" is a specialized term it may help to introduce it / define it.

2) Add links to wikipedia articles and/or article sections to help readers get additional background information if needed. Example: dip-slip faults

3) Maybe shift the "importance of growth faults" section towards the beginning, just after the "growth faults" section. This would give the rest of the article more context.

Bkilli1 (talk) 23:32, 13 October 2013 (UTC)

1)While the article is very well written from a geologic perspective, you need to keep in mind that it needs to be understandable from a high school level perspective. I do not think anyone in high school would be able to understand this without a lot of previous research. 2)In relation to the previous comment, in order to help aid other people's understanding of you page, you need to link certain words to the pages that relate to them. 3) For your 'Growth faults kinematics and evolutionary stages', make sure you use citations. You have one in the middle of the section, but all of the others ones dont have one. Zandra619 (talk) 02:20, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

Hello Emad, these are my suggestions

1.	The pictures are dark and kind of hard to read so maybe using a lighter background would make them easier to read.

2.	The information is the “growth faults kinematics and evolutionary stages” is mid of confusing because I can’t tell if it is a sequence of events or just a paragraph in bullet points.

3.	More information on the importance of growth faults in oil and gas might be nice too.

-Tyler Elorriaga — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jelorr1 (talk • contribs) 02:29, 15 October 2013 (UTC)