User talk:Eman Ahmed Shaikh

Easypaisa
I undid your edit to Easypaisa. Content needs to be written with an encyclopedic wp:tone. What you had added sounds to me like an advertisement. I would recommend that you read similar articles (that are well-written - what ever that is...) and copy its style. Thank you Adakiko (talk) 05:53, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback I will ensure guidelines are met. Regards. Eman Ahmed Shaikh (talk) 06:48, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

Information sources
Please avoid using wp:PRIMARY sources. Primary sources are considered very questionable reliability. The writer can generally say what they please without any editorial oversight. Please use wp:SECONDARY sources as references. Many of your citations you added, in Easypaisa and Telenor Microfinance Bank would be considered primary sources. Also, those awards are probably published by the vanity press and the writers likely financially benefit from their subjects. i.e. not a reliable source. Cheers Adakiko (talk) 06:03, 9 November 2020 (UTC)

Understood. Thanks for the feedback. Means a lot Eman Ahmed Shaikh (talk) 06:49, 9 November 2020 (UTC)