User talk:Emiliepichot/sandbox/MabelPing-HuaLee

Feedback from Will
Hi - great work on this Mabel Ping-Hua Lee draft. I think your additions are really great. Additionally you have found some strong sources and made substantial improvements on the existing content. I have two pieces of feedback. 1.) In the Ministry section, there is an errant '24' which I think should be 1924. 2.) When you move your content to the live article, consider adding categories for Suffrage and Women's suffrage movements. You may also want to consider linking other articles to this article since there are none that currently do that. Awesome work! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:38, 6 December 2018 (UTC)