User talk:Emily-Dobbe/Evaluate an Article

Very nice work evaluating the lead paragraph of Lowell mill girls! I agree with you that there are multiple problems with the lead. I encourage you to consider correcting them as part of your work on the project, if that interests you, or at least to leave your suggestions on the Talk Page of the article in hopes some one else will address them?

Also, congrats -- you have edited Wikipedia by publishing this evaluation under your User Page! Clio.at.work (talk) 18:34, 15 October 2020 (UTC)