User talk:Emily.Potter2198

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Emily,

Good changes. Let's look more at your first sentence: "one of the greatest most natural disasters" sounds a little odd to me. How else might you phrase that?

Drshimizu (talk) 19:07, 4 November 2019 (UTC) 