User talk:Emily.lavelle/Peter Tomsen

Move?

 * The following discussion is an archived discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section. 

The result of the move request was: Not moved. Jafeluv (talk) 09:11, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Emily.lavelle/Peter Tomsen → Peter Tomsen –
 * I would like to move this page to mainspace but don't have 10 edits Emily.lavelle (talk) 14:27, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Oppose - probably notable per WP:BIO, but needs references in support otherwise will be prodded per WP:BLPPROD. – ukexpat (talk) 17:38, 8 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Oppose: It needs reliable references/soucres as per WP:SOURCE attributed in the form of inline citations per WP:INCITE and external links formatted as per WP:EL.--Michaela den (talk) 09:38, 10 June 2011 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

Improvements
I fixed the dead link in references. The references section needs footnotes within the main article, and the stuff in the external links section should be what's referenced in the ref tags. (Read WP:CITE) I'd be happy to help out a bit with the editing. A couple of categories that might be helpful are United States ambassadors to Armenia and United States ambassadors to Afghanistan though I'm pretty sure they shouldn't be added to the article until after it's moved into the regular article space. 207.65.109.10 (talk) 07:55, 15 June 2011 (UTC)