User talk:Emily2930

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Chloroplast structure review
There were sections that were to technical and went over my head and especially would have went over my head as an intro biology student. One of these especially was the section about Plastoglobuli. This section never really defined what plastoglobuli are but instead went into more technical and science specific terms related to plastoglobuli. Another section that I thought has this issue was the "pigements and chloroplast colors" section. This section further broke down into subheadings such as chlorophylls and carotenoids. These sections were so specific that I think it was hard to stay away from the really technical terms to describe what these pigments are in a chloroplast.

Another issue I found was that some of the papers that were cited as being used as sources online were really only previews of papers and I couldn't actually read the entire paper without signing up for a membership or paying a fee. This would make it difficult if I wanted to do further research into the topic as a college student looking to this article for reliable sources.

I think chloroplast structure is so detailed and that this sub section within the article possibly glazes over some of the details that are important for understanding as a student. This could be avoided by making this section its own article and going into further, more thorough detail.

Emily2930 (talk) 02:44, 28 September 2016 (UTC) Emily Guthoerl