User talk:EmilyCatherineCollins/Campo Ma'an National Park/Gingerlily6 Peer Review

Tania's Review on Campo Ma'an National Park Wiki Page:

I looked in your Sandbox and see that you've specifically added to the Biodiversity section. Great comprehensive overview of the biodiversity! If I may add some suggestions to improve it:

- Rather than "The mammal species reported are 87" I would change this to "There are 87 mammals species reported including..."

- When you mention the critically endangered western lowland gorilla I would also add their scientific name and change the hyperlink specifically to the Western lowland gorilla since it is a well-developed page that gives us lots of information on this specific endangered species. Right now the hyperlink sends us to the overall gorilla wikipedia page.

- Same comment for the "central chimpanzee". It would be good to specify the species you are referring to by adding the scientific name and corresponding hyper link (I checked they both exist).

-Same comment for "Reptile species reported are 122" would change to "there are 122 species of reptiles reported..." Same for fish.

- I have trouble understanding this sentence: "It is also one of the 33 bird identified areas in the south western corner of Cameroon" what is a bird identified area? Does it mean that out of the areas that have birds there are 33 areas and this park is one of the 33 areas?

Otherwise, great job - very informative!