User talk:EmilyMoeller/sandbox

Peer review for article : Child sex ratio
Hi Emily;

I like your additions to the article, I think this is very valuable info. I only have few suggestions to make it better.

1) In the section "Likelihood of an Imbalanced Child Sex Ratio" you said that ratio in South Asia has more males. I think it would be good idea to support this sentence with some sources, and maybe to say what is the current ratio in some of those countries. You could use the article that address this issue " Asia's gender imbalance is bad news for growth", see the link below:

https://asia.nikkei.com/magazine/20170413/On-the-Cover/Asia-s-gender-imbalance-is-bad-news-for-growth

2) In the second section you've created you nicely present one of the causes of the change in the sex ratios. I think it might be good idea to also add another section or bullet point about the causes of the sex ratio imbalances in India, for example the sex- selective abortions. You could use the article above as a source, and I have also found another useful source from the Annual Review of Sociology Journal; " Causes and Consequences of Skewed Sex Ratios" by Tim Dyson

https://www-annualreviews-org.aurarialibrary.idm.oclc.org/doi/pdf/10.1146/annurev-soc-071811-145429

3) In the last section I've noticed that there are also some sources missing, and I think that you could refer some of the information mentioned there to the articles I've mentioned in the previous two points.

Great work, good luck :) Czajkama (talk) 04:15, 2 April 2018 (UTC)