User talk:EmilyParrish/E. B. Lewis (illustrator)

Hi Emily, It looks great - you expanded a lot!

Do you have any citations for the biography section? The second paragraph seems like new information.

Citation for seventy books addition?

Citation for Hall of Fame of Children's Book Writers addition?

Is there any updates about recent work? Looks like nothing from the last few years. 173.59.63.57 (talk) 16:10, 17 November 2019 (UTC)emgriffUW

Peer Review
Your edits and additions are clear, concise, and definitely improve the quality of the article.

I would perhaps add more citations in the text. When reading two to three paragraphs that only have one citation, I was uncertain whether or not all of the information was pertaining to that single reference. However, looking at the references I believe they did so my suggestion might be citation overkill.

Also I would consider changing the biography heading to something along the lines of early life and education or possibly turning career into a subheading to biography, since in my opinion his career is part of his biography. However, ultimately the article is organized in an easy to read and understandable manner.ElleWidogast (talk) 03:45, 19 November 2019 (UTC)