User talk:EmilyWysocki/sandbox

Peer Review by Daniel
1. Well the article is a work in progress so I will peer review the beginning work. The phrase that gave me a direction in which the article was heading is women and education. 2. Cant really suggest the author to make any changes this early but the article is cited with a neutral tone. 3. At this point, the author just needs to build off of the material they have written. Was able to view and see where the author cited the material. Laying the foundation of the topic and footnoting every sentence. Overall good.