User talk:Emily Lindquist/sandbox


 * include some pictures to help the audience visualize better. Maybe of the trichobezoar (hairball)?


 * For sections that you did not include like Mechanism/Pathophysiology, Prognosis, and Research directions... include the heading in the article and state that no information is available if that is the case because looks more professional and shows that you know the what you are talking about.


 * In the Epidemiology section, can you talk about where a majority of the those 64 cases have been recorded and took place to give the reader an idea of what parts of the world it is in.


 * Try to add more info in each of the sections unless there is not a lot of info out there?


 * Overall, this was a very interesting read. I found it very interesting and easy to comprehend. Overall....Great Job!

Shahaan Arshad

Shahaan96 (talk) 02:57, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

--Sweiner02 (talk) 16:37, 18 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Needs more citations. All paragraphs should have at least one.
 * Missing mechanisms and recent research sections.
 * The language usage is simple and clear. This is very lay approachable.
 * I'd like to know a little more about the surgery for removal.
 * Could use more links to other wiki pages for medical terms.

Myda Khan
 * I would like to see more information added for causes, for example are there any psychological causes
 * Would also appreciate more Information put in for the epidemiology section if there is any?
 * Further research section is missing
 * overall I think this was extremely informational, just a few adjustments need to be made