User talk:Emilygdeng/Behavioral addiction/Kangw01 Peer Review

Something that I think the article does really well is explaining the topic in a way that is very cohesive and easy to understand. A change that could be made would be expanding the research section. By providing more significant research on the topic it might bring about more treatment options or insight that could be added to your article. Something I noticed that your article has but mine lacks would be in classifications. I am not sure if my topic could have classification, but I feel as though it could and might be something that I should consider looking more into. Kangw01 (talk) 00:49, 7 October 2019 (UTC)Kang W. Lee