User talk:Emilypeet/sandbox

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I'm an online ambassador for your WMST 250: Women, Art, and Culture (2014 Q3) class and have just stopped by to provide a quick review and add what I hope will be helpful comments.

You've done a nice job on this article of a very intersting woman! The information is well-organized, generally well-written, and cited.

Some suggestions are:
 * Titles of magazines, books, works should be in italics, titles of magazine or journal articles should be in quotations
 * When using adjectives to describe Tharu like well-renowned, it should be attributed to the person or author who made that claim, like: "According to xxxx, Tharu is a well-renowned..."
 * It would be nice to have some background and education information, see Janise Yntema
 * You may want to reread for minor edits - for instance, for: "She has also been apart of the Suabaltern Studies editorial since" - do you mean editorial staff?
 * I removed a couple of "alsos" - which are not needed - and added some wikilinks to other articles
 * There are words that don't need to be capitalized, like Women’s writing, Secretary (unless it was used as a title/name - Secretary Susie Tharu), Professor (unless used with her name), etc.

These are essentially nit-picky items - you've done a nice job!

I'll be watching this page and your sandbox page for any updates. You can also "ping" me (just type "" as you see it) to your message on this page or leave a message on my talk page. Happy editing!-- CaroleHenson  ( talk ) 16:16, 4 November 2014 (UTC)