User talk:Emilyrosepetro/sandbox

Excellent overview of the tile decoration - I'd add more references beyond my article, for instance work that is cited in the notes there. You can also find examples of black-line tile - the Metropolitan Museum of Art has some that might be from Bursa.

As for links, muezzin does not seem absolutely necessary. For eyvan, I would note spelling - and check if there are also Wikipedia articles for alternate spellings, as happens sometimes.

The plan for editing the article is very clear, and under each section "carvings" and "tiles" there are many specific kinds listed. I think the overview is great, and maybe subsections could be added later under each lead to help the viewers understand each kind more clearly. There's only an overview for now and maybe later each section could be edited more specifically with approximately equal length. This is much better than the original article, which only introduces all kinds of decorations under one single section. I also like the way old articles is commented. It is very good that plagiarism and argumentative view points are frequently noticed. Specific ways to revise these plagiarized ideas could be added later. So far in the edit most ideas came from a single article, so more references may be researched and added later. Like the original article, maybe images can be added later to illustrate those different kinds of decorations and provide better understanding for the viewers.Tiffanyzhang98 (talk) 08:27, 15 March 2019 (UTC)