User talk:Eminsyla/Music Composition and Composers in Prishtina

Comments
Introduction should be a summary of your article. Even an encyclopedic article should be a summary of the field in itself. Don't try to cover all composers, that's more appropriate for lists. Give general overview of style and what, if any, sets composition and composers in Prishtina apart from other places. Keep up the good work --Arianit (talk) 07:14, 26 February 2014 (UTC)


 * You've done some good research. However, I noticed some issues. Please write from a non-personal and non-attached point of view: "our country" doesn't belong here. Also, use a disinterested/cold tone, and avoid peacocks terms. --Λeternus (talk) 22:30, 26 February 2014 (UTC)

Introduction
Good job on all the material that you have gathered for this article. I think you need to edit the introduction because you do not want to summarize each section in the intro, just give the big picture of your topic.

Rinalila (talk) 00:49, 2 March 2014 (UTC)