User talk:Emmacmckee/Evaluate an Article

I'm evaluating the article about my dad, titled "Mike McKee (ice hockey)". The first thing I'm wondering is how Wikipedia articles that are about multiple people with the same name get evaluated. When I look up "Mike McKee" on Wikipedia there are a few others that all have a description in parentheses saying what they are famous for. I wonder if there would be better way to do this? Possibly by using middle names?

This article is in the "stub" category, meaning it has very minimal information and has had little work done on it. I think a key change that could be made off the bat would be adding what team he played for in the introduction sentence that states "Michael G. McKee (born June 18, 1969) is a Canadian businessman and former professional ice hockey defenceman."

A lot of information could be added to the "early life and education" section, for instance: when did he start playing hockey? what were his high school and college hockey careers like? what was his major in college?

In the "career" section, they neglected to mention his years playing in the AHL, and just talked about the NHL. I think it was good that they mentioned that he scored a goal against Wayne Gretzky, because Gretzky is a well known player so this situates him in a larger timeline.

The links in the reference section are all relevant and are able to be clicked on.

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