User talk:Emmap2/Women and Gender Equality Bill in South Africa

Peer Review

This article does not have a ranking, as it is a new article, but it is in an overall good place. This article has great structure and organization. As this article is examining the bill of South Africa, the content of the page seems to only summarize the bill. It would be beneficial to add a section of the public reception and societal effects that this bill has had thus far on the South African population. It would also be beneficial to describe the specific topics addressed in the different chapters in a summary sentence about the bill, “this bill has 3 chapters that focus on general provisions, societal changes, and equal representation and empowerment of women, respectively” or something along those lines to link the lead more with the main sections. The strengths of this article are its clear sections, and that will allow it to be easily built upon. Improvements that can be made to the article are adding more on the effect that this bill has had thus far, or the expected effect that political commentators or thinkers have stated will happen. Also, including a criticism section would allow for a broad perspective on the shortcomings of the bill or the anti-feminist oppositions the bill faces. This article seems to not be done yet, but its potential once its finished shows an article that can be very well-developed.

I hope this helps! Wishing you the best with the rest of your article!

Kporras5 (talk) 10:18, 7 December 2021 (UTC)