User talk:Emmas2746/sandbox

peer review
your draft is good. I would add more to the fake news section and define what fake news is. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Katierstice (talk • contribs) 14:34, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

– Thank you for the feedback. I've added that to the section.Emmas2746 (talk) 17:55, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

peer review
very good draft! I would just suggest adding more information and examples on what the news covers and how it has an effect. Mycahhaynes (talk) 15:42, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

- Thank you for the review. This has given me an idea for my article. Emmas2746 (talk) 17:57, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review of Draft
Your draft is very good and the information is very useful. You should add more about the different types of news media and coverage. You could also discuss how people come up with ideas for news coverage and how it is done. It would be interesting to talk about how news is spread on social media. Skylarfogerty (talk) 15:42, 8 March 2018 (UTC)

- These are great points. Thank you for reviewing my draft. Emmas2746 (talk) 17:58, 6 April 2018 (UTC)

Article Draft
Emma, Your sources are excellent and varied. Your draft is thorough and well-written--don't forget to do a final edit, however. Small errors can be difficult to see. My only advice is to be sure to credit each of your sources with citations before you publish. Good work.JAirhart 19:18, 25 March 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Airhartcomp (talk • contribs)

- Thank you for the review and for reminding me to check for mechanical errors. Emmas2746 (talk) 17:58, 6 April 2018 (UTC)