User talk:Emmymorri98/sandbox

Hi Emily! I am just going to send you my word document if you prefer to add comments to my revisions on my article and then transfer any comments over to my sandbox-- it will be in the Charlene.est.33/Mysandbox. In my word doc, I have highlighted in red which corrections I have made. If you have any questions you can email me at cesteva@drew.edu because I will probably see any questions sooner via email then in the chat! Can you inform me which mode of communication best suits you? Whether via email or chat? Also, you can send me your word doc as well since I imagine yours may give you trouble to transfer over to the new sandbox we are to make. In my case, my edits did not carry out with the exception of the parentheses I put them in.

Peer Review: Cute Aggression
Hi Emily! I think the plan layout that you have gathered together for the article is going to help the article develop nicely. Specifically, I think the article heading for the hormones involved in this phenomenon is a good direction to go in. The hormones dopamine, oxytocin, serotonin, and endorphins etc. and their connection with cute aggression should provide a more in-depth understanding. If the sources you have already found do not clearly explain the role of hormones in cute aggression, I recommend you find ones that do. Also, if you have not already done so, you should mention the significance of the sources you presently have. For instance, what beneficial information can they offer so that the concept of “Cute Aggression” is better conveyed? I think stating their purpose will make revising this article more manageable.

- If you have any updated info on your article you can reach out to my email cesteva@drew.edu so I can peer-review that as well.