User talk:Emscheele/sandbox

Comments on Wiki Draft

1. I made a few minor grammatical changes and rearranged sentences for clarity 2. "It is so important because it is a ritual among family members, meaning that every family member has a role in making the tamales no matter age." Are you referring to the making of Hallacas or tamales here? Not clear. I'd cut the first clause and just note all family members have a role, therefore it's an important tradition for forging family bonds... 3. say more about specific foods assoc w Epiphany 4. I think the second section (Gratitude/Honor Traditions) can simply be added to the first. 5. I'd also make a transition at beginning of the first sentence. ie. There are not only traditions and rituals linked to the consumption of food; many Latin Americans practice traditions when discarding foods. 6. Your example of Gnocchi 29 doesn't fit with traditions around discarding.