User talk:Emsteacher

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Hello, Emsteacher, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Cartwheel - I have no idea what I am doing here. At the time you reviewed my article I had only copied and pasted it - I was waiting for further instructions on how to begin. At this time I have edited the first paragraph (lead) and made a few typo repairs in the second paragraph.

Hanm11, I have attempted to review your article but I am unsure if the notes I have offered will appear. I have no idea what I am doing here. There are some typographical issues - "Advances in technology HAVE impacted the way..." "in regards to" - regardS is not appropriate. Too many commas and sentences that begin with modifiers rather than straightforward language. Best of luck.