User talk:Enaumann/sandbox

Emma's Peer Review for her Draft by Jennifer Gignac
You do really well with explaining all of the different albums that they came out with and all of the different types that they have created and how they changed. I liked how you said that one of the albums was a "mythical Storytelling sense" for one of the albums.

I am assuming that you are going to be putting this insert at the bottom of the "Early Life and Musical Beginnings" section of the page.

All in all, I think everything looks good! I believe that you will be adding some cited sources to your info so that it wont get booted off which is going to be good! I think all of this will make more sense to us when we actually put the info into the page haha. Its a little hard to know what goes where and how it all ties together when it is just a section that we are adding to. :) 17150120J (talk) 14:53, 26 April 2018 (UTC)

Emma's Peer Review - Caitlin
I think the information you have found so far will be great for adding to the article you have picked, although it is only in bullet points for now you have lots of information to build on and contribute the the article. The rough draft for the section on Early Life is very good, just make sure you know which of the sources you have listed is the one you used for that section. I also think you have a great amount of sources to work with. Overall, I think this is good work so far.Gentilec128 (talk) 15:02, 26 April 2018 (UTC)