User talk:Enderjh/sandbox

Hey make sure that your references come after the punctuation! Bdaklutz (talk) 00:18, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

Also, you still need a figure somewhere in there Bdaklutz (talk) 00:38, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

Consider revising your sentence that starts with 'Synaptobrevin (VAMP)....' It's a really long and confusing sentence. Try something like this: "Synaptobrevin is a part of the vesicle-associated membrane protein (VAMP) family and contributes one α-helix to the SNARE complex. Tethered to the plasma membrane are syntaxin-1 and SNAP-25 which contribute one and two α-helices, respectively. SNAP-25, a Q-SNARE protein, is anchored to the cytosolic face of membranes via palmitoyl side chains covalently bound to cysteine amino acid residues in the middle of the molecule." Bdaklutz (talk) 01:42, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

I didn't immediately understand at first what you meant by the '...two other SNARE complex proteins...' in the last sentence of the first paragraph. I'd put synaptobrevin and syntaxin-1 in parentheses right after it just to be clear. Bdaklutz (talk) 01:42, 27 October 2014 (UTC)

This section is under Structure and Function, correct? Maybe focus more on SNAP-25 than the overall process of vesicle fusion. If they want to read about vesicle fusion, they can go to that page. What is SNAP-25's structure and function? Bdaklutz (talk) 01:42, 27 October 2014 (UTC)