User talk:Engelde/sandbox

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Nice work on your draft. A few basic things first Other than that, look good. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:27, 18 April 2019 (UTC)
 * You need to copyedit your work. You have a lot of cases where there's no space before the start of a sentence, or missing spaces between words. I fixed a few, but you need to go through it carefully.
 * Only capitalize the first word of section headers. So rather than "Time-Compensated..." use "Time-compensated". Also "Columbus hypothesis" not "Columbus Hypothesis" (this is in the text, not the header).
 * You could probably add more links to other articles.
 * The final quote is too long. Try to restrict quotes to less than a sentence.