User talk:Engl101trinh

1) Did your partner follow the format guidelines for a Wikipedia article (contains a lead and a reference list, the right things are bolded, section headings are correct, etc.)? If not, what needs to be altered to make it look like a Wikipedia article? The article does look like a Wikipedia article, I especially like the info box. However, make sure to include links to other Wikipedia sites, even if it is the same word as I have noticed Wikipedia does.  And, possibly writting out what abbreviations are before the abbreviation (like for MBBS).

2) Is the article well-written? (“its prose is engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard”) Select one sentence that you consider to be well-written. Also select at least one sentence where the writing could be clarified or polished up to make the article more interesting and informative. This is very well written and comprehensive study of the college in Pakistan.

Well-written: The primary college complex is a four-story construction that spans over an area of 11,000 square feet. It is comprised of several departments including: lecture halls, laboratories, dissection hall, library, museum, computer laboratory, auditorium, seminar rooms, and offices. Additional space is available for the possibility of new departments or the expansion of older ones

Needs work: Candidates are then selected on Merit based on entry test marks, F.Sc marks, aptitude entry and interview marks

3) Is the article comprehensive? (“it neglects no major facts or details and places the subject in context”) List one section of the article you find to be very comprehensive. Also list one section of the article that needs to be expanded or contextualized better to make the article more complete and persuasive. Very comprehensive, I especially liked your introduction paragraph.

Comprehensive: Frontier Medical College (FMC) is one of several medical schools affiliated to Bahria University.[1] It is also one of only 32 medical colleges in Pakistan that is recognized by the Pakistan Medical and Dental Council (PDMC) and of one 16 in the private sector. [2] Located in Abbottabad of the Khyber-Pakhtunkhwa province in Pakistan, FMC has approximately 500 students in the MBBS and BDS programs. The College was founded in 1995 as the first private medical institute in Khyber-Pakhtunkhwa.[3]

Needs work: I would just recommended explaining what a Hostel is.

4) Is the article well-researched? (“it is a thorough and representative survey of the relevant literature”) If the sources listed are from websites, follow the links. List each website and include whether you find it to be credible or not. Good references, but with websites make sure to include the title, author, date, or publisher not just the url. Websites:

5) Is the article neutral? (“it presents views fairly and without bias”) Does it fulfill the Wikipedia ideal of Neutral Point of View (NPOV)? Include any sentences that appear to be biased. You did great on keeping straight facts without bias and only using the statistics to back up the research you were saying.

Biased sentences: I would slightly reword this to something like, this is a new type of school in pakistan, this is not biased but could be construed as it ... the first of its kind in Pakistan

6) Is the article of the correct length? (“It stays focused on the main topic without going into unnecessary detail”) Does it meet the minimum length requirement for the class of 2 pages of text double spaced? Great length, I would just like a little bit more explanation of hostels.