User talk:Engl101williamson

1) Did your partner follow the format guidelines for a Wikipedia article (contains a lead and a reference list, the right things are bolded, section headings are correct, etc.)? If not, what needs to be altered to make it look like a Wikipedia article? not exactly, make sure you put the line break under the bolded sections

2) Is the article well-written? (“its prose is engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard”) Select one sentence that you consider to be well-written. Also select at least one sentence where the writing could be clarified or polished up to make the article more interesting and informative. Some sentence/grammatical errors.

Well-written:Mia Hamm, former UNC women's soccer player and founder of the Mia Hamm foundation, has given a speech during the halftime of games in 2010 and 2011 to raise awareness for bone marrow donations

Needs work: "Named after built in the year 1935" "men's lacrosse team in . Thirty years"

3) Is the article comprehensive? (“it neglects no major facts or details and places the subject in context”) List one section of the article you find to be very comprehensive. Also list one section of the article that needs to be expanded or contextualized better to make the article more complete and persuasive. I think the whole article needs to be a bit longer. I think the information you put is good but it won't be 2 pgs double spaced.

Comprehensive:

Needs work:

4) Is the article well-researched? (“it is a thorough and representative survey of the relevant literature”) If the sources listed are from websites, follow the links. List each website and include whether you find it to be credible or not. Add more sources

Websites:

5) Is the article neutral? (“it presents views fairly and without bias”) Does it fulfill the Wikipedia ideal of Neutral Point of View (NPOV)? Include any sentences that appear to be biased.

Biased sentences: Some say he was given the job through a mistaken identity error (slightly biased.... maybe re-word it)

6) Is the article of the correct length? (“It stays focused on the main topic without going into unnecessary detail”) Does it meet the minimum length requirement for the class of 2 pages of text double spaced? no. needs a little more.