User talk:Engw3307p2/sandbox

Good work on the history section. The information covers a lot of key points, and combined with the section that’s already there, it will flow well. The points above the history section are very helpful in explaining what psychiatric pharmacy is. I think the first point, and possibly the others as well, would do well in the introduction. At the moment, the intro of the article is very short and doesn’t fully explain the topic. The Practitioners sections are useful in explaining how people become certified in psychiatric pharmacy, but expanding them to include more on how psychiatric pharmacy is used in a practical setting would be interesting as well. The first point on the sandbox page lists some of the people and groups typically treated by psychiatric pharmacists, and expanding on some of those examples in more detail could help the article.

Jmg613 (talk) 17:31, 18 November 2019 (UTC)