User talk:Enhazaam

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Emanuel Milman has been accepted
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 * Thank you so much! I'm really happy!! Can you also go over three other drafts I wrote? Even if you don't publish them, at least give me comments. Enhazaam (talk) 07:04, 18 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Draft:Meir Bar-Asher
 * Draft:Tzipi Horowitz-Kraus
 * Draft:Netanel Korin
 * Enhazaam (talk) 07:06, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rotem Oshman (June 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:16, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Tzipi Horowitz-Kraus has been accepted
 Tzipi Horowitz-Kraus, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! SL93 (talk) 00:38, 19 June 2024 (UTC)

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He's clearly notable, but what you wrote was a poorly sourced hagiography, rather than a a neutral encyclopaedia article. When you write about a person

Much of your text consists of opinions rather than verifiable facts, and doesn't alway confirm the claimed facts. For example, your paragraph ''David Goodblatt died on September 25, 2019, after being struck by a vehicle during his morning walk. He is survived by his wife Sasona, their children Keren, Michael, and Grace, and granddaughter Logan. Goodblatt was known for his nurturing nature, often sharing moments of warmth and encouragement with his students and colleagues. He left a lasting legacy in both his academic field and his community'' is sourced to comments made by friends and family on a legacy site. I'd be interested to know why you consider that a reputable, independent third-party source. Also, it doesn't confirm any of the claimed facts in the first sentence, and his character is irrelevant to his notablity. Saying how wonderful he was and attributing to friend and family comments on an obituary page is just flim-flam.
 * you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.
 * You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
 * There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
 * You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

Similarly, your claim His scholarship significantly advanced the understanding of Jewish self-governance and nationalism in antiquity has three sources, none of which is an independent third-party sources, and none of which say what you claim, which would only be an opinion anyway. Everything is renowned, excelled, prestigious and so on.

If you think you can write this with proper sources and verified facts, and without the "He was wonderful" stuff, let me know and I'll sandbox it for you. Incidentally, books don't need references but should have an isbn Jimfbleak - talk to me? 08:27, 25 June 2024 (UTC) a similar tone applies throughout, Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources.


 * I understand, can you move it to sandbox? Enhazaam (talk) 06:32, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Noah Hacham (June 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Flemmish Nietzsche was:

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Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 13:35, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Noah Hacham (July 2)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DoubleGrazing was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:36, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Zeev Rotstein (July 9)
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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 21:17, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Zeev Rotstein (July 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Youknowwhoistheman was:

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Youknow? (talk) 16:01, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Netanel Korin (July 13)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ldm1954 was:

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Ldm1954 (talk) 00:58, 13 July 2024 (UTC)