User talk:Enidwexler

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Alani's Peer Review (for Katie)
- There are some adjectives used and may make it sound biased or at least like there's some opinion there. So like the line "Shaw and Weaver, also founding members of the Split Britches theater troupe, described their subtle style," take out "subtle" and the line "Finding funding for the WOW Cafe was always a complicated affair." That last one is opinionated (you're saying it was complicated). Other than that though I really liked it and you added great points! I really liked the list of productions they've done.

I don't know if you're done yet (I'm assuming not), but possibly look into adding the impact they had, if there's data/research for that? Also if any of the famous/more well known actors who came from it, if they have mentioned or attributed anything to WOW, that would be good to add. Zoreltimes (talk) 05:13, 13 November 2017 (UTC)