User talk:Enoi CYN/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
 * Talk:Jiangsu - WikipediaEnoi CYN (talk) 00:17, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate? (Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)


 * Firstly, it is a c-class article but also a level4-vital article in geography. Secondly, its topic is a Chinese province where I come from, I am very familiar with the information list in the article. Also, I know Chinese and got years of experience using Chinese websites, which makes me able to verify the reliability of its citations.Enoi CYN (talk) 00:17, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Evaluate the article (compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)Enoi CYN (talk) 00:17, 28 October 2021 (UTC)


 * There's a delay in information. The former editors had down many works and provide data in different aspects about Jiangsu, while it looks like those information hasn't been updated for 2 or more years. For example, the data of its GDP is updated in 2018.

The tone is natural. Content is relevant, but a little mixed from each subtopic. Some parts of descriptions need a reliable citation. The part of history would be more clear if it is divided into several subtopics. Sources are from government websites and reliable journals.Enoi CYN (talk) 00:17, 28 October 2021 (UTC)