User talk:Entran5820/sandbox

Peer Review - Sadie Eller
You do a good job at remaining unbiased. I would add more information to your paragraphs. You could answer questions such as, "How long did they protest?" "Were the import duties decreased?" You could also add more sources so that your article does not appear unbalanced.

Peer Review-Ashleigh Dyer
- Overall you've done a great job. I would just look back over some of your grammer like at "The US got involve because of the corruption.." "involve" should be "involved". — Preceding unsigned comment added by Amdyer4504 (talk • contribs) 15:20, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

i fix the things you suggested — Preceding unsigned comment added by Entran5820 (talk • contribs) 16:16, 16 November 2018 (UTC)

Miranda Wilkerson
You"ve done a very good job with your article contributions. I would add some more thought provoking information and detail. Why did bananas cause such a large conflict between the countries? Also I think it would be beneficial to add a few more sources.

Jacey's Peer Review
Your article contributions are very well written! The only thing I would suggest would be to go back and check the punctuation in your sentences! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jcmoss8917 (talk • contribs) 15:28, 22 October 2018 (UTC)