User talk:Eparedes97/sandbox

Elizabeth: Nice job with the Content Designer draft! Here’s my feedback on each section: Duties & Responsibilities: Is your plan to integrate this section with what’s in the section on the live page? If so, how? Also, please make sure that you are citing your sources using the citation tool so that others can see where your information is coming from. You added a lot of great information to “Web Designer Vs. Web developer”, “Significance of “Web Designing and Web Developing”, “Duties” and “Career Path / Salary” sections. The next step would be to write it as full sentences rather than bullet points. Also, for the “Career Path / Salary” section, you may want to look for some data on how salaries of Content Designers have changed for position in the various fields, including marketing, advertising, and government. Overall, great job! Best, Prof.bgreg (talk) 00:49, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

Hey, Elizabeth, I just reviewed your article and the information and sources you have are really great. You have a lot of information and I think every sounds good, the one thing I would suggest is to put everything in sentences rather than bullet points. I think the information would flow a lot better and be much easier to read. Once you do this, your article will be amazing! It's looking great so far. Danielleee g (talk) 15:12, 24 October 2016 (UTC)Danielleee_g