User talk:Epicthem8

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Hello, Epicthem8, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Welcome
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We hope you like it here and encourage you to stay even after your assignment is finished! Jack90s15 (talk) 20:43, 18 September 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hello, I just finished my peer review of your article. Looks good! There are some points in the History section that switch from present to past tense and that's a little confusing. There's also a super long sentence in the Lead that could be shortened or split up. Also, you should cite each fact that you put in and connect it to the source. It looks like you added 3 sources but they aren't cited by the information you added.Wgroneman (talk) 18:54, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review
Well done on your article. Some of the content in your article is substantially similar to the information contained in your sources, which might be problematic. A bit more information in the body of your article might have made it more complete as a whole. You can find my peer review here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Epicthem8/Giy%C5%8Df%C5%AB/Mdcarroll99_Peer_Review Best of luck! 01:03, 9 December 2019 (UTC)Mdcarroll99 (talk)