User talk:Epinerd/sandbox

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Hi. Nice start. Here are some thoughts on your draft:
 * The lead section of the article is supposed to be a summary of all the major points in an article. The goal is for a fairly straightforward statement of facts. The first half of the first sentence (The number of abortion clinics (clinics for which more than half of all patient visits are for abortion) in New York State declined through 2014, but has since increased) probably belongs in the lead, but the rest might fit better in the Clinic history section of the article.
 * Your first two references are before period at the end of the sentence. References should always go after punctuation on Wikipedia.
 * The third paragraph is really long, and would be easier to read if it was split into two paragraphs.

I tried to create fixed-width (or fixed relative-width) with this edit. What I did was add  to the header of the table to set the width of each column as a fixed percentage. Alternatively, you can just do it for the one column of interest, like I did here. That's probably better, because it only makes that one column fixed width. In either case, I think you have to do it in the source editor, which makes it a lot more of a nuisance. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:06, 14 April 2020 (UTC)