User talk:Eqw55

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Hello, Eqw55, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback
Nice work on your draft. A few minor formatting things need fixing
 * References go after punctuation, not before
 * Section headers should use sentence capitalization - only the first word and proper nouns should be capitalized

You could also add more links to other articles. Terms that the average reader might not be very familiar with should be linked the first time they appear in the article.

Finally, the Modern-day examples could use some additional sourcing. One source, that's basically a list of statements and rebuttals isn't ideal - you should try to find a source that discusses these things in context, and report upon that context. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:16, 20 November 2017 (UTC)