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Emma's Peer Review
You seem to have plenty of ideas for your article. I like how you chose an article that already has a fair amount of information so that you are able to incorporate new ideas into the existing outline. I think discussing the evolution behind the act of lepidophagy is a great point to include! It is certainly a crucial factor when exploring how the behaviour differs across species. I have a few suggestions just to build upon the outline you have already listed. It may be helpful to include a few different species and contrast how the behaviour occurs depending on size/habitat. I know you mentioned that this is a factor you will address, but it seems to be a subtopic that almost requires its own paragraph. For example, a separate section describing how the environment directly impacts this behaviour in ~3/4 different species could be useful. Another suggestion would be to include an advantages/disadvantages discussion. On the current lepidophagy wikipedia page there seems to be a lot of jumping around between the benefits and the costs of the behaviour. It could be helpful to include a section that directly contrasts the tradeoff involved. Overall, you seem to be off to a great start! I think the sources you have selected will provide an excellent basis for developing this page. Looking forward to reading the completed article. Emmaantle (talk) 01:23, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

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Thank you Gavinmemorial for your feed back. I will certainly go into greater explanation of the attacking behaviour. As for your question, I did not talk about energy expenditure in my article.

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Thank you for your feedback. It gave me some good ideas that I can incorporate into my article. I will certainly look at incorporating different species and contrast their behaviours and environments. I also think I may incorporate the trade-offs of this behaviour. All this depends on sources I can find. Thank you for you help!