User talk:Erg223/Climate resilience

This is a very excellent work, but there are a few improvements that could be done. Work on sentence structure a small bit, and reform the way in which your argument is adjudicated throughout the piece. Your logical flow is very good, but it could be better, is essentially what I am saying. Not much to improve on, just scan through it one or two more times to not only solidify your ideas, but also to improve your overall writing style. The flow of ideas throughout the paragraphs makes sense, and it creates an effective argument through multiple analytical lenses. Excellent work, I am looking forward to reading your final draft when you use these recommendations I have given you.