User talk:Ergwald

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Hi, once you put content on an article page, it will be judged as it is. Some comments on the draft
 * Book and journal refs need page numbers
 *  It is considered one of Murnane's greatest and most ambitious works&mdash; A couple of refs doesn't make it incontrovertible fact, and it has a promotional tone. I'd rephrase something like It has been described as one of Murnane's most important works works
 * If you can add any facts, such as sales or awards, that would be good
 * If there were negative or neutral reviews, (I'll look if I get the chance), you should include them for balance
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Jimfbleak - talk to me?  16:47, 22 January 2016 (UTC)

Thank you for the COI response. For single references, just put the page number or range, eg or For multiple refs to the same book, personally I put etc as the ref and then have the book in a new "Cited texts" section, below. For multiple refs to the same source, give it a name as I've done with the first example.

AfC notification: Draft:Inland (novel) has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Inland (novel). Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 19:29, 23 January 2016 (UTC)

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