User talk:Erica.JeanLouis

Hello and welcome
Hello and welcome to Wikipedia. I saw that you made some nice edits to the cleansing ten lepers page. Pretty nice for a first edit. A few suggestions:


 * The history and the modern medicines are not relevant to that page. Could you please just shorten that to one sentence with a link to the wikipage for it?


 * The biblical analysis is fully relevant. It just needs WP:RS references. For the Beacon Bible Commentary you need an ISBN, publication year, author and a page number. Beacon Bible Commentary is however a fully WP:RS compliant source.


 * www.christnotes.org and www.answersingenesis.org are not WP:RS sources and can not really be used. However you can probably keep 90% of that material, but need better sources, e.g. I tried Google books as you can see here there are many sources for that. The Mercer and North sources are both good and can be used as references if they support your text. There are also many others on that list.


 * Please also see WP:Primary on why secondary sources are needed.

Could you please use those sources instead? If you have questions, please feel free to ask at the end of my talk page. I will be glad to help. Cheers. History2007 (talk) 00:42, 26 April 2011 (UTC)