User talk:EricaNewton/sandbox

Suggestions from Andrew F
You have a solid topic that shows you know much about this. I like how you created the entire outline for your article with detailed notes on what you are going to talk about. So that someone like me who knows nothing about this topic can understand it and see where you want to take this article. The only tiny suggestion that I could make to you, but i can see that you are doing that, is to just keep adding more information, and to make sure all of the sentence structures are correct. I do like how you are staying neutral as well and no bias is present unlike what i am struggling with. I also just noticed how you took each source and created outlines for each of them. That is probably something that I should start working on. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Afowler143 (talk • contribs) 19:17, 1 April 2019 (UTC)

Hi Andrew! Thank you for the feedback. I am a very organized person and I personally have to organize everything. I am happy someone appreciates my organization skills! Also, I appreciate how you said I am staying neutral. That has been one of my biggest goals through writing this and I am really happy to know it is coming together good! I will be adding more information as well. Thank you! EricaNewton (talk) 16:35, 2 April 2019 (UTC)