User talk:Ericamorin

Welcome!
Hello, Ericamorin, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Notes on draft
Hi! I wanted to give you some feedback on your draft. My main notes would be to be careful about tone, as you want to avoid it sounding too positive or promotional. Be careful with slang like "paved the way", as this may not be common for other countries or for non-native English speakers. A good alternative may be "made it easier for" or similar. The professional life section section could also be divvied up into some subsections as well.

Overall this is good - good job! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:18, 30 March 2018 (UTC)