User talk:EriccaGarcia/sandbox

PEER REVIEW
I like your draft. You did well on keeping the information Neutral, no biases. I was impressed by how clear it was. However, youre section is not balanced because you only used 1 source. To make it more reliable you should use multiple sources. This would be the most important change I would recommend. --Lizvillaloboss (talk) 05:35, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Peer review
I think your draft has some good information, but it's not very organized. When I read it, it felt like I was jumping to many different topics. What I would prefer that you can possibly do is talk about the different sections of the Cocos Plate then explain how each part is formed and provide details. Well, your first paragraph isn't bad, it's just the ones that come after. Those paragraphs just seem like your describing the location and not providing any other information. Try to make it like your first paragraph or connect them altogether somehow.

For example:

- Cocos Plate

- East Pacific Rise

- Cocos Ridge

- 1985 Mexico City Earthquake

- Northern boundary/Middle America Trench --> Central America Volcanic Arc

- Rivera Plate

- Farallon Plate

Lastly, you can possibly also describe the Cocos-Nazca spreading system (that would be interesting). Also, you need more than 1 reliable source. Try using the library's databases: Ebisco or ProQuest. KawaiiKoreaboo (talk) 07:38, 1 May 2017 (UTC)

Review
Your post is well-written and free of grammatical errors. I would advise to just focus on putting your sentences together a little better. But, I also agree with the previous reviewers. Every sentence has great information, but it's just stating locations. I would look at other articles to see what other information can be found to add them in. Iloveolivine! (talk) 02:23, 2 May 2017 (UTC)

peer review
I also do agree with the other reviewers that your post has information stated very clearly. More sources would be ideal for your post. Your post was also very neutral, which is good! Sara916 (talk) 05:56, 2 May 2017 (UTC)