User talk:Ericli123/Brenda Mallory

hello

Peer Review
Hello!!

I just finished reviewing your article! I hope my comments help. (: — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dpere049 (talk • contribs) 17:52, 25 February 2020 (UTC)

So I realize that my comments were not previously transferred over. I basically pointed out the errors in formatting and grammar that seem to have been fixed. I liked that there was a lot of her personal information available. I would work more on “Recurring Chapters in the Book of Inevitable Outcomes” there are some citations needed and re-wording to be done. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dpere049 (talk • contribs) 20:41, 25 February 2020 (UTC)