User talk:Ericorphys73/sandbox/first draft

Eric, you are going to need to go more in depth in each section on your page. In the geometry section, you should describe what the geology is of the STD, not just say look at the picture. You should also describe the picture you have, as I’m not too sure what it is. In the formation section, you should describe the three theories you have listed. You’re going to need to make your page more like a Wikipedia page with links to certain words and fix your references to match those on Wikipedia. -Zach Kelly

Eric, you need to provide more information for each section and link vocabulary that could be confusing to readers to their wiki page. The references need to be redone correctly and you need to go into more depth explaining your figure. All it says is to look at it, how about describing what the figure is and go into depth explaining why it is important. This page appears to be a basic outline, however a lot more depth on information is needed along with references and links to make the page more user friendly.

-Oliver Navo — Preceding unsigned comment added by Onavo1 (talk • contribs) 20:51, 21 October 2012 (UTC)