User talk:Erikbcervantes/Coffee production in Uganda/Kristinatseng Peer Review

Peer review

This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info Whose work are you reviewing? Ericbcervantes

Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Erikbcervantes/Coffee_production_in_Uganda

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?

Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?

Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?

Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Lead evaluation Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes Is the content added up-to-date? yes Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? no Content evaluation--see overall

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral? yes Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? no Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? no Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? no Tone and balance evaluation--see overall

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

See overall evaluation for this section

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?

Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?

Are the sources current?

Check a few links. Do they work? yes, works fine.

Sources and references evaluation Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? yes Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Not from what I read. Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? yes Organization evaluation

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?

Are images well-captioned?

Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?

Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

Images and media evaluation

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?

How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?

Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?

Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

New Article Evaluation

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?

What are the strengths of the content added?

How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation After reading the original page, I think this edit provides it with sufficient information. I particularly think the organization by decade gives clarity to the overall structure. However, I'm not sure if you are still working on the sources, but I do suggest using more sources, especially when it comes to numerical data. Overall, it is concise, informative, and structured. Kristinatseng (talk) 06:02, 7 April 2020 (UTC)