User talk:Erin513/sandbox

What you currently have on your document is great. My main comment is for you to fix your citations and clean up certain parts. Also, certain parts of your work are not cited and should be so you should probably look over that. It's better for you to cite too much than for you to not cite enough. Overall, continue working and make sure to cite everything.

Elizabeth's Comments
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 * concerned with the quote? try to paraphrase. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elizabeththies (talk • contribs) 16:28, 19 April 2018 (UTC)