User talk:ErinMacLeod/sandbox

Opioid Crisis:

Great article! Good in-text citations and information. A few small errors in article. "Naxolone" was linked twice back to back under the combating the opined epidemic section. Also References does not have a heading. -Twilla

Hello Erin!

I think you did well in your article, i really enjoyed the back ground information that you giving including the information from the 1990's until now. I was unaware of the opioid epidemic as it dealt with Canada how long it has existed within the commonwealth. You also did good with adding legislation passed regarding your topic. There is just a few grammatical errors you should go back and fix. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ajwst221 (talk • contribs) 03:59, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

Your article was informative and it clearly shows that you put the time and effort into your topic, although there were some minor issues. I would suggest that you go through your paper and look for minor spelling issues that were spread throughout the paper. I would also suggest that you take a look at the wording of some of your sentences throughout the paper as well. Your article looked pretty good other than those relatively minor issues. -Bradley